Peer Review Two

I love the way in which Annaliese has discovered that a poem is interpreted by it’s readers, that is, many meanings and theme can arise from one single quote, but numerous amounts of reasons flow from the same quote and this decision is influenced by who the person is, their past experience and their current mindset. Annaliese’s insights toward the way the Aboriginal Inhabitants consider dreaming as their everything is inspiring – however, elaborating on this to a deeper level would truly express, i believe anyway, their spiritual connection with the land.

Overall, her insights and her mind is appreciated and enjoyable to discover.

 

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  1. Expression needs attention Annabelle. But thank you for trying hard to create a useful Peer Review.
    *Please attend to editing your work carefully. Here is what I have picked up:
    *it’s readers,= it’s=it is [this is one of those odd exceptions in the English Language where the normal use of ‘s for possessive case or ownership has been upstaged.]
    * many meanings and theme = many meanings and themes [both plural]
    * numerous amounts of reasons= numerous reasons
    * Overall, her insights and her mind is appreciated and enjoyable to discover.= Overall, her insights and her mind are worth learning about.

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