I liked your take on George Orwell’s theme in his writing, the way you presented it with a relevant topic in today’s day and age is very relatable and shows you have a bright mind to do so. Not only do you have a technique for debating, but you also show your knowledge of what is happening in the world. As I did enjoy reading your work, the only thing I would comment on for improvement is for your blog posts to be a little bit longer. Your writing is enjoyable but it ended so soon. Overall, I believe you have talent and are gifted in putting your thoughts into words. Well done!