Peer Review Three.

Victoria, well done on this phenomenal blog! I love the fact that you wrote this with the language we studied in tutorials. I can see from that alone that you have put a lot of effort and time into this creative piece of writing. I definitely wouldn’t have thought of this idea so I thoroughly enjoyed reading what you had to say. You are an encouragement to people to think outside of the box and to truly be creative. You have shown an accurate understanding of Sleary’s character and successfully depicted a clear image of work, family and home. I am glad I chose to look at your blog site this week.

Well done! See you in class.


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