Peer Review Four.

Hey Alana!

Great blog post this week! I thoroughly enjoyed your repetition of the phrase; “all like one another” It created ease in the way it communicated from your mind to the reader’s. Your description of your city was very different to mine: mine being chaotic and yours being calm and collected. Your visual of the mailman, the children, the birds and even the mailboxes was refreshing to picture as my city has a different variety of people and houses. I enjoyed glancing through your perspective of your hometown.

Your final comment about your sisters and you all being like one another as you plumped on the couch was quite comical. Well done!


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